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jacob.s.greene Campers
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| Subject: Luke Parker Son of Athena Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:17 am | |
| Name: Lucas Samuel Parker IIINickname: LukeGender: MaleDate of Birth: 05/28/1999Place of birth: Astoria, NYPlace living before arriving at camp: Astoria, NYCamp: Half BloodAge when arrived at camp 13Physical appearance Physical Description: Tall, Muscular Height: 5'7"Weight: 180 LBEye color: GreyStyle: See photo Below Clothing style:Sporty Birthmark/scars/tattoos (if any): Yes a tattoo of my mother On his upper right arm Personality and characteristics: Personality: Luke is outgoing. Well he does get easily frustrated being that he has precognition.Easily thought to be the smartest person alive but still gets a be n a test Special habits: Smart Merits and talents: Can play a clarinet. Gets straight A's Demerits: Expelled from school twice and being arrested for beating a guy up without hitting himFears: Spiders and Failing gradesHobbies: Reading, Playing clueFavorite time of the day: NightsFavorite place at camp: Haven't seen itFavorite activity at camp: Never done oneLeast favorite activity at camp: never done one Family and Relationships Relationship with others: None but girlfriend and familyMortal Parent: Lucas Parker II God parent Athena Stepparent: Mary ParkerSiblings: Jon ParkerBest friend: Jamal RamboBoyfriend/Girlfriend: Rebecca GreeneEnemy: Himself Battle Powers: Sees the futureWeapons: A celestial Bronze swordFatal flaw: Being to wiseStrengths: Brains, Charm, Playing clueWeaknesses: Too humble, wise and those terrible spiders Biography I was born in Astoria, NY at 7:00. Six years later , I kept dreaming of my mother. I asked my dad who was Athena and he said: "Luke that is your Mother". Every night after, she kept saying: "Luke, I am your Mother". In 6th grade, we found out I had Asperger's syndrome and eerie, since I cannot get along with my parents. They yell at me every time i got kick out of school My First time it was 2nd Grade I was making kids cry by beating them up when all i said is Don't do it Then in 5th Grade Told the teacher off then she hit me and i pushed her back. Then i got arrested for telling a guy he was going to lose and they found my hand prints on them the weird thing is he gave me a Sword. I took it to my dad he said it was celestial bronze. I looked it up and there was no such thing. I defeated my first monster a little bit after that. It was a Cyclops. With me going to camp I won’t see Rebecca, my girlfriend, that much. I got to camp while I was on a camping trip with my family and Rebecca's family. Her Brother Jake, was showing me the forest. There was a camp. He said this is Camp Half Blood. Then he said: "I know you are son of Athena'' and I replied, "how do you a son of Athena". He said "I am a Son of Dionysus and so is Rebecca". We will bring you to Camp Half Blood. Rebecca and I got to know each other a lot better. One time in training, I was looked down, then he defeated me. Then another day I went against the same guy. I would see the fight in my head before it happened, then I realized I got a gift to see in the future from my Mother. We will bring you to camp half blood. That were me and Rebecca got to know each other a lot better. I am so humble one time in training I was looking down because he was complementing me on my form and I just kept talking. Then he defeated me. Then one day I went against the same guy I would see the fight in my had before it happened and I lost it showed me I would do a uppercut I did a uppercut still and lost the same way, Then I realized from my mother I got a gift to see in the future. Then Luke Realized that there was a limitation to the power he can only use it in battle that explains why he wins every one Relationships with mortals: Well Luke he a very odd case. His step mom Mary doesn't even know Luke is a demigod. His best friend He doesn’t have one. With his dad his relationship is well his dad raised him so his dad is like his best friendRelationships with campers: Well at camp he got to know his cabin mate Jamal Rambo. Then he got to know Rebecca more well every time he sees her it like a god made her especially for me
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16278 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 27 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:29 am | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:08 am | |
| Name: Lucas Samuel Parker III Nickname: Luke Gender: Male Date of Birth: 05/28/1999 Place of birth: Astoria, NY Place living before arriving at camp: Astoria, NY Camp: Half Blood Age when arrived at camp 13 Physical appearance Physical Description: Tall, Muscular Height: 5'7" Weight: 180 LB Eye color: Grey Style: Jet black and curly Clothing style: Punk Birthmark/scars/tattoos (if any): Yes a tattoo of my mother On his upper right arm
Personality and characteristics: Personality: Luke is outgoing. Well he does get easily frustrated being that he has precognition.Easily thought to be the smartest person alive but still gets a be n a test
Special habits: Smart Merits and talents: Can play a clarinet. Gets straight A's Demerits: Expelled from school twice and being arrested for beating a guy up without hitting him Fears: Spiders and Failing grades Hobbies: Reading, Playing clue Favorite time of the day: Nights Favorite place at camp: Haven't seen it Favorite activity at camp: Never done one Least favorite activity at camp: never done one Family and Relationships Relationship with others: None but girlfriend and family Mortal Parent: Lucas Parker II God parent Athena Stepparent: Mary Parker Siblings: Jon Parker Best friend: Jamal Rambo Boyfriend/Girlfriend: Rebecca Greene Enemy: Himself Battle Powers: Sees the future Weapons: A celestial Bronze sword Fatal flaw: Being to wise Strengths: Brains, Charm, Playing clue Weaknesses: Too humble, wise and those terrible spiders Biography I was born in Astoria, NY at 7:00. Six years later , I kept dreaming of my mother. I asked my dad who was Athena and he said: "Luke that is your Mother". Every night after, she kept saying: "Luke, I am your Mother". In 6th grade, we found out I had Asperger's syndrome and eerie, since I cannot get along with my parents. They yell at me every time i got kick out of school My First time it was 2nd Grade I was making kids cry by beating them up when all i said is Don't do it Then in 5th Grade Told the teacher off then she hit me and i pushed her back. Then i got arrested for telling a guy he was going to lose and they found my hand prints on them the weird thing is he gave me a Sword. I took it to my dad he said it was celestial bronze. I looked it up and there was no such thing. I defeated my first monster a little bit after that. It was a Cyclops. With me going to camp I won’t see Rebecca, my girlfriend, that much. I got to camp while I was on a camping trip with my family and Rebecca's family. Her Brother Jake, was showing me the forest. There was a camp. He said this is Camp Half Blood. Then he said: "I know you are son of Athena'' and I replied, "how do you a son of Athena". He said "I am a Son of Dionysus and so is Rebecca". We will bring you to Camp Half Blood. Rebecca and I got to know each other a lot better. One time in training, I was looked down, then he defeated me. Then another day I went against the same guy. I would see the fight in my head before it happened, then I realized I got a gift to see in the future from my Mother. We will bring you to camp half blood. That were me and Rebecca got to know each other a lot better. I am so humble one time in training I was looking down because he was complementing me on my form and I just kept talking. Then he defeated me. Then one day I went against the same guy I would see the fight in my had before it happened and I lost it showed me I would do a uppercut I did a uppercut still and lost the same way, Then I realized from my mother I got a gift to see in the future. Then Luke Realized that there was a limitation to the power he can only use it in battle that explains why he wins every one
Relationships with mortals: Well Luke he a very odd case. His step mom Mary doesn't even know Luke is a demigod. His best friend He doesn’t have one. With his dad his relationship is well his dad raised him so his dad is like his best friend Relationships with campers: Well at camp he got to know his cabin mate Jamal Rambo. Then he got to know Rebecca more well every time he sees her it like a god made her especially for me
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:36 am | |
| You might want to add more to your biography... Like 1 paragraph. Tell your relationship with your family, who is your girlfriend... Your journey to Camp. Also, you have to choose one camp If you wanna be like Nico, who is at both camps, I will have to discuss it to Katelyn (aka ChocoKat) | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:37 am | |
| how can i be at both camps | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16278 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 27 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:38 am | |
| Alright first off, don't double post. Click the edit button 'edit' under the long black bar. Nice try, though there're something that you have to pay attention to about your character Luke: 1. Luke can't be a son of athena while being the legacy of three other gods at one time. If you like all the four gods and goddess chosen, create different characters. 2. Is he in Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter? Pick one only. 3. It'd be much better if you elaborate more on Luke's personality, merits and demerits. If you're not sure how to do, you can refer to the approved characters listed in this link: https://campsfordemigods.rpg-board.net/f11-approved-characters4. 'Relationship with others' refers to how well does Luke get along with the others which include his parents, siblings, mortal friends, etc.. before and after going to camp. 5. 'Very wise' can be a strength but not a power. If Luke doesn't have one, you can simply put down 'none'. 6. What is 'charm playing clue' ? 7. Spiders can be a fear, but not a fatal flaw unless his fear towards spiders are so intense that this could actually lead to his breakdown and death. 8. How humble Luke is that leads to his downfall in battles? 9. How's his weapon using skills? 10. Write more for his biography. You may include general information of the character, relationship with the others, something about his/her family members, how he/she arrive at camp, etc. I strongly advise you to have a look of the approved characters to see what has to be included. Anyway, break your leg in writing:) If you have any question, feel free to ask me or Lee Katrina (my character) is looking forward to having a new roommate in CHB xdd | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:52 am | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16278 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 27 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 1:01 am | |
| I see you've made some changes to your biography. It'd be better if you could elaborate more on how was his life like before going to camp, how did he end up at camp, etc.. For the rest of the profile, please refer to my previous post above | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jun 19, 2013 10:20 am | |
| Don't forget to fix orthographic errors... | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:06 am | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Luke Parker Son of Athena Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:33 am | |
| - LeeUnderwood wrote:
- Don't forget to fix orthographic errors...
what does this mean | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16278 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 27 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:57 am | |
| Lee is suggesting that you have to be more aware of the language and grammar used. | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Sun Jun 23, 2013 10:31 am | |
| it makes sense what do you think | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:24 pm | |
| Every night after she kept saying Luke i am your Mother
Correct:
Every night after, she kept saying: "Luke, I am your Mother".
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Mon Jun 24, 2013 12:53 pm | |
| lee dont mean to be rude i want a camp half blood offical to see this not a jupiter | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Mon Jun 24, 2013 7:56 pm | |
| Jacob, I'm an admin. It doesn't matter if your a greek or roman... And I'm only helping you. If you see, I haven't even told you something to fix about information, etc. Only grammar. You don't have to be greek or roman to have good grammar. Nor I have to be greek or roman to reply an app, after all, Im an admin. But if you feel better by Kat checking the app, then ok. But remember the grammar. | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Tue Jun 25, 2013 12:42 am | |
| just remember you talking to a autistic case | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:42 am | |
| Jacob, did you finish fixing? | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:09 am | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Wed Jul 03, 2013 11:25 am | |
| About the tattoo, at what part of the body is it? Add more at personality... I mean, "Autistic" isn't a personality. Autistic people are normal people and have their own personalities as well At weaknesses, none of them are. About the grammar thing, Im going to give you an example, ok? I was born in Astoria, NY at 7:00. Six years later , I kept dreaming of my mother. I asked my dad who was Athena and he said: "Luke that is your Mother". Every night after, she kept saying: "Luke, I am your Mother". In 6th grade, we found out I had Aspergers syndrome and eerie, since I cannot get along with my parents. With me going to camp I won’t see Rebecca, my girlfriend, that much. I got to camp while I was on a camping trip with my family and Rebecca's family. Her Brother Jake, was showing me the forest. There was a camp. He said this is Camp Half Blood. Then he said: "I know you are son of Athena'' and I replied, "how do you a son of Athena". He said "I am a Son of Dionysus and so is Rebecca". We will bring you to Camp Half Blood. Rebecca and I got to know each other a lot better. One time in training, I was looked down, then he defeated me. Then another day I went against the same guy. I would see the fight in my head before it happened, then I realised I got a gift to see in the future from my Mother.This: , : . ; ." ) symbols are very important, don't forget them ;D | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Thu Jul 04, 2013 12:11 am | |
| Lee i understand now And the tattoo was of his mother | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Thu Jul 04, 2013 1:55 am | |
| Ok, but at what part of the body is the tattoo located?
All Chocokat and I have told you to edit, you can do it by pressing the 'edit' bottom... ok? | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Fri Jul 05, 2013 3:14 am | |
| You didn't fix the 'Personality' btw... | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12315 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 24 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Mon Jul 08, 2013 9:39 am | |
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LeeUnderwood Praetor
Posts : 430 Drachmas : 13825 Join date : 2012-09-27 Age : 27 Location : Puerto Rico
| Subject: Re: Luke Parker Son of Athena Mon Jul 08, 2013 1:07 pm | |
| Jacob, you can look up in some applications examples about personalities... they can't just be a word. Sentences... | |
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