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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Wed Jun 19, 2013 2:18 pm | |
| Name: Jacob Samuel Greene Nickname: Jake Gender: Male Date of Birth: 05/28/1991 Place of birth: Duluth MN Place living before arriving at camp: Astoria NY Camp: Half Blood Age when arrived at camp 12.5 years old Physical appearance Physical Description: Tall and average Height:5'9" Weight:181 Eye color: grey Hair color and style: Black Curly Clothing style: Punk Birthmark/scars/tattoos (if any): Scar Under lip Left side , Cut by both eyes by a football
Personality and characteristics: Personality: Well he is a very outgoing person Special habits: Guessing wine flavors right Merits and talents: Made white wine from water, Found his way to camp half blood with only a magic compass and never fails Demerits: Left home at 4, Witness a murder did nothing and got arrested for a wicked party Fears: No wine and Not having a book to read Hobbies: Wine making Favorite time of the day: Day Favorite place at camp: The mess hall Favorite activity at camp: Reading Least favorite activity at camp: Capture the flag
Family and Relationships Relationship with others: Spends time with older sister Rebecca allot. Hates his step mother God Parent Dionysus parent: Lisa Greene Stepparent: Jerry Greene Also a demigod of Dionysus Siblings: Rebecca(Full) Caro(Half) Best friend: No one Boyfriend/Girlfriend: Anne Wise Enemy: Step Dad
Battle Powers: Can conjure wine Weapons: A Celestial Bronze sword Fatal flaw: Loyal Strengths: Being very resourceful, Being smart , being a weapon master Weaknesses: Wine Party satyrs
Biography The first memory was on a vacation in Greece we saw statues moving I said dad he said what I said the statue are moving he said let’s get some water for you and Rebecca. Well it started when I was drinking water when I was with my dad. He got super tipsy and I drank my water I was tipsy to then he took me out and said. Son "you and Rebecca are both Demigods". I said "What" Then he "said it a half god half mortal" Then the reason he knew we were Dionysus is because he are half brother. Well I left home at 4 on the streets survived by making people wine got a couple bucks thee from there only lasted for 6 months When I was on the streets I saw a murder happen that when I realized I would be safe at home. I went home my dad said I was worried that you would not come home. Then at Night I got a dream from Athena she said" you will date my daughter". SO that was what led me to camp half blood. Then I met her she was Anne Wise. She hated me but then we both loved the arts. Well then one day I went out and got a football we played it at camp then I got a cut on my head from running in to an arrow shot from a son of Apollo. Then at thanks giving I was eating turkey and bit threw my lip. Then the day after thanksgiving I met a satyr her name was Bella Grove She said why don't we go party with your daddy. Dad why are you at camp I want to meet my son. Well I went home to spend time with my cousins my sister carol we are half. She said dude can I have some wine. OK I got here some and my step mom said you are not allowed to use your wine powers. I said you’re jealous because I and Rebecca do have them. Then I went to bed. Rebecca came up to me and said "you didn't have to treat her like that" I said back “I am sorry" Well the reason why I did apologize I'm smart and she was right I made my sister drunk for a family event. Well at camp half blood we found out I am a weapon master. When I was 5 we found out I was resourceful. Made wine from water Well I went on a visit to home with Rebecca We did are party every year I got arrested and then my dad burned the guard alive by showing the guard his real form while I was told to look awayRealonship with mortals: Well there werid since he a demigod he can be some what miss understood
Last edited by jacob.s.greene on Thu Jul 18, 2013 2:08 am; edited 14 times in total (Reason for editing : To get to be a camper) | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16866 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Wed Jun 19, 2013 2:45 pm | |
| 1. Again, choose either athena or dionysus to be the god parent, but not related to both at the same time. 2. For the basic information part, I guess you've taken 'gender' as 'age' 3. What do you mean by "Scar underlip from thanksgiving , Cut by boths eyes from football"? 4. For the personality part, it'd be better to add a more detailed description. 5. Things written at the column of 'merits' and 'demerits', these are more like to be included in biography. These can also be used as examples to support your description about your characters' personality, like rebellious, smart, generous, wicked, etc.. 6. Could you give a little explanation of why Jacob hates her stepmother or enjoy being with her sister? Also, is her sister a mortal or what? 7. Give more elaboration on power. 8. For the weapon, we generally accept Celestial Bronze in Camp Half-Blood. 9. Give more elaboration on strengths, weaknesses and fatal flaw. 10. Write more for biography. You may include general information of the character, relationship with the others, something about his/her family members, how he/she arrive at camp, etc. | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:01 am | |
| i read the rles i can be related to him his father a demigod that his whole story like frank from the heroes of olympus son of mars great grandson of poseidon | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16866 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:36 am | |
| Frank is an exceptional case There aren't many demigods who come from a bloodline with 2 gods involved . So, I have to say no to this one | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:13 am | |
| but his role is his dad a demigod to | |
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16866 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:28 am | |
| We generally don't allow demigod linked with two gods/goddesses because it's almost impossible to happen especially in CHB - you'll know demigods get killed easily if you've read the books. As I said, Frank is an exceptional case . We understand that you really like these two deities, but you may have to make it intottwo characters instead of one. | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:31 am | |
| ok can we please understand some make mine was a demigod that made it | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Sat Jun 22, 2013 5:44 am | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:12 am | |
| - jacob.s.greene wrote:
- Profile of Jacob Samuel Greene Son of Dionysus
General
Name: Jacob Samuel Greene Nickname: Jake Gender: Male Date of Birth: 05/28/1991 Place of birth: Duluth MN Place living before arriving at camp: Astoria Ny Camp: Half Blood Age when arrived at camp 12.5 years old
Physical appearance
Physical Description: Scar underlip from thanksgiving , Cut by boths eyes from football
Height:5'9" Weight:181 Eye color: grey Hair color and style: Black Curly Clothing style: Emo Birthmark/scars/tattoos (if any):
Personality and characteristics:
Personality: Well he is a very outgoing person Special habits: Guessing wine flavors right Merits and talents: Made white wine from water, Found his way to camp hlf blood with only a magic compass and neer fails Demerits: Left home at 4, Witness a murder did nothing and got arrested for a wicked party Fears: No wine and Not having a book to read Hobbies: Wine making Favorite time of the day: Day Favorite place at camp: The mess hall Favorite activity at camp: Reading Least favorite activity at camp: Capture the flag
Family and Relationships
Relationship with others:Spends time with older sister rebecca alot. Hates his step mother God Parent Dionysus parent: LisaGreene Stepparent: Jerry greene Siblings: Rebecca Carol Best friend: No one Boyfriend/Girlfriend: Anne Wise
Enemy: Step Dad
Battle
Powers: Can conjur wine,
Weapons: A Bronze sword Fatal flaw: Loyal Strengths: Being very resourceful, Being smart , being a weapon master Weaknesses: Wine Party stayers
Biography Well it started when i was drinking water when i was my dad got super tipsy and i drank my water i was tipsy to then he took me out and sad. Son you and Rebecca are both Demigods. I said What that he said it a half god half mortal Then at nite i got a dream from Athena she said you will date my daughter. SO that was what led me to camp half blood . Then i met her she was Anne Wise. She hated me but then we both loved the arts. Well then one day i went out and got a football we played it at camp then i got a cut on my head from running in to a arrow shot from a son of Apollo. Then at thanks giving i was eating turkey and bit threw my lip. One day i met a saytr her name was Bella Grove She said why dont we go party with your daddy. Dad why are you at camp I want to meet my son. well i went home to spend time with my cousins My sister carol we are half. She said dude can i have some wine. OK i got here some and my step mom said your are not alowed to use your wine powers. I said your jealous because me and Rebecca dont have them
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ChocoKat Camp Counselor
Posts : 830 Drachmas : 16866 Join date : 2012-08-29 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood :)
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:53 am | |
| Firstly, don't double-post. Click the 'edit' button at the top and make amendments instead of posting below.
Here're the things that I've mentioned above that are left unsolved: 1. What do you mean by "Scar underlip from thanksgiving , Cut by boths eyes from football"? 2. For the personality part, it'd be better to add a more detailed description. 3. Things written at the column of 'merits' and 'demerits', these are more like to be included in biography. These can also be used as examples to support your description about your characters' personality, like rebellious, smart, generous, wicked, etc.. 4. Could you give a little explanation of why Jacob hates her stepmother or enjoy being with her sister? Also, is her sister a mortal or what? 5. Give more elaboration on power. 6. For the weapon, we generally accept Celestial Bronze in Camp Half-Blood. 7. Give more elaboration on strengths, weaknesses and fatal flaw. 8. Could you please clear the biography up a little bit and fix the grammar, as I don't really understand what you're writing about... | |
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jacob.s.greene Campers
Posts : 103 Drachmas : 12903 Join date : 2013-06-18 Age : 25 Location : Duluth MN
| Subject: Re: Ιάκωβος Πράσινο Son of Dionysus Wed Jun 26, 2013 1:43 am | |
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